Kamari's new beginning WIP
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Hi. Thank you for stopping by. Any big issues before I start value? Story clear (though I think value will help with what's important on the board). Thanks.
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With values.
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@KevinTreaccar I'm trying to understand, is the robot an athlete and the kid (I'm guessing he is Kamari?) and sees his name on the bulletin board for robotics club? and 3:14 is the pi equation? Sorry it's not totally clear for me.
Erin Richardson
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@ArtistErin Kamari tried to make the basketball team by building a robot. He (and the robot) didn’t make the team, though. That’s when he saw the poster for the new robotics club.
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@KevinTreaccar it's rather unclear that he built the robot to get into the team. I think to make that clearer, I would have put kamari in a powered robotic suit, with the basketball in his hands... right now it looks to me like he's friends with a robot who's sad he'd rather be on the robotics squad.
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@AngelinaKizz That was the original idea, but I could not figure out a composition that showed both parts of the story.
Here's the saturated flats – not to be confused with saturated fats – but I might give another go to the original idea and see if I can find the magic angle that makes it work.
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@KevinTreaccar Was close enough that I went ahead and finished it, but I have half the month to figure out something that works better.
