Cloud entry

[Bill B.]

This was my entry into the Critique Arena. Found the prompt really challenging but just did my best. Any advice on improving my composition would be appreciated. Thank you.

[Katherine]

@Bill-B Hi Bill, I'd try zooming out and playing with scale a bit more to make that cloud-hand looming and a bit more menacing.

[susanhowarth.art]

@Bill-B Hi - I think the three characters with horses are too small. I couldn’t tell what they were without zooming way in.

[kirsten-mcg]

@Bill-B This is a fun concept! I agree with @Katherine . Try zooming out a little. At first I couldn't tell that the giant hand was coming from the cloud. A little more space behind the hand would help with that. Also, maybe try making the hand softer looking, so that it matches the cloud a little better.

[Bill B.]

@kirsten-mcg Thank you for the response. I’m still very new to composition. I think when I’m in the thumbnail phase and I find a design I like, that should be a sign for me to explore that design further.