Here is my picture... I need to get a better image of it and do some touch ups but this is what I have so far. Ink is so unforgiving, but that kind of makes it fun too.
Do I need more contrast? Any photoshop type edits? Thanks
Great idea, @Frogpunzel. Yes, add dark gray or near black for contrast.
Looking good
@Jeremy-Ross Thank you, I will do that!
@Frogpunzel Agree on adding contrast. Maybe lighten the punctured clouds a little, too, so the holes pop a little more? Though not as much as Mother Goose, of course.
@Frogpunzel Yes, this reads easier and is definitely more dynamic.
@KevinTreaccar Awesome, thank you!