July Contest Feedback

skeletortoise

Hi,

I am looking for feedback on my July piece. The concept was that the driver made the other car look like a carrot so that his rabbit would drive for him.

I'm wondering if that concept comes across and if not, how could it be better?

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skeletortoise

@Stephanie-H thanks so much! I was originally going to have the driver off to the side relaxing with some lemonade. My intent was just to make him look lazy. I think I'm trying to simplify the piece, I may have taken out too much.