May Storm
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Hello everyone! Newbie here! This is a concept I'm working on for STORM. This is an incomplete visual - more elements are needed to complete the story. Your thoughts so far?
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Hi Traci,
You made me laugh out loud. The look on that pig’s face is priceless. Looks you are heading in a great direction, can’t wait to how you are going to develop this illustration. Thanks for posting.
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Hi Traci with an "i". Cute concept, I love a good pig story! Two things stand out to me. One I'd like to see the pig diggin' in a little harder to it's stance, leaning back to the right resisting her pull and conversely I think her body is to upright. Her upper body should be leaning more forward in a tugging motion. Right now her feet are lined up one behind the other(imagine a white line in the middle of the road, she looks like she has both feet lined up on that line where in reality one leg would appear shorter and "back" if that makes sense.) When I can't get the right perspective on paper I literally get out my phone and have someone take a picture in the desired position to see where I've gone wrong.maybe her expression could be a little more "annoyed" as well. Keep at it! Looking forward to seeing your progression!
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@Larue Thank you so much! Will work on this over the weekend!