Storm sketches

[jenn]

OK I'm still hacking away at this. Thanks for the feedback and encouragement on color @Valerie-Light and @PenAndrew.

[Asyas_illos]

@jenn you can do it!

[jenn]

@Asyas_illos Thanks!

[Kristen Lango]

@jenn This feels clear! I can see that they need to cross the river to get to the fair and they are brainstorming solutions - I think this will work out as a finished piece

[jenn]

@Kristen-Lango thank you for that feedback. I was feeling unsure about the level of clarity.

[jenn]

The final (same as the contest thread). Thanks @Kristen-Lango, @Asyas_illos @PenAndrew @Valerie-Light @skeletortoise @kirsten-mcg for pushing me to strengthen it.

[Valerie Light]

@jenn Nice work and great progress! And again I love the way you're using color!

[PenAndrew]

@jenn Much better Jenn.

[AngelinaKizz]

Nice job Jenn!

[PenAndrew]

@jenn I am glad if I helped in any small way.

[skeletortoise]

@jenn great job!