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    • Michael Oblivion
      Michael Oblivion last edited by

      I'm getting a late start on this on this one so this is pretty rough state here, Looking for thoughts on your first read and anything you might add to make this treehouse more of a treehome

      april treehouse.png

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      • Larue
        Larue last edited by

        Love the mood and colors but this is supposed to be spot illo so this may change things quite a bit for you design wise. I'd love to see some more additions like, windows, stairs, plants etc. that tell someone or something has made it a home.

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        • Michael Oblivion
          Michael Oblivion last edited by

          @larue thanks for the tips, working on an update now

          april treehouse 4.png

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @Michael Oblivion last edited by Asyas_illos

            @Michael-Oblivion nice perspective I love the lanterns maybe they could be lit a little bit?

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            • Kristen Lango
              Kristen Lango @Michael Oblivion last edited by

              @Michael-Oblivion Awesome camera angle and I like the trees converging, but there is something about it that feels a bit unfinished to me 🤔

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              • Michael Oblivion
                Michael Oblivion @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos ooh, I'm gonna toy around with that a bit, thanks

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                • Larue
                  Larue last edited by

                  Good job at adjusting to make this a spot illo!

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                  • Michael Oblivion
                    Michael Oblivion @Kristen Lango last edited by

                    @Kristen-Lango 🤣 well that could be a few things but for me the biggest one rn is the stairs. I was trying to do something like this one here but wasnt happy with the results when i tried. i sketched in a couple other things i was considering here but wasn't able to complete.

                    april treehouse DEMO.jpg

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