Developing great visual stories
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I prefer the second too! I like seeing her face.
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@AngelinaKizz thank you! I be been working on it!
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@asyas_illos loving this. The bird’s ribbon seems to tangent with the roof, I noticed. The bit of curl in the middle is completely contained by the roof shape, if you see what I mean. My only other suggestion would be to possibly lighten the birds, or at least their faces, as they’re do dark.
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@crispalomino I did notice that tangent, yah it needs adjusting and I also agree about doing something to the birds I love the dark but maybe I can adjust it a little so their faces are clearer, thanks for the suggestions!