CBP Hansel and Gretel exterior feedback

[Griffin McPherson]

Redoing this assignment because I want it to have a lot more life and story in it. Just looking for some feedback before I move onto values and coloring.

Specific questions:

1. Does it feel balanced? I worry the bottom half might be too busy compared to the top.
2. Does the moss on the roof look right or am I just looking into it too much?

Aside from that just let me know if anything looks off or could be removed/added

[Asyas_illos]

@griffin I think it looks great if you are worried about it looking to busy on the bottom you could add some clouds or trees to your background to even it out but really I think it’s good how it is

[Griffin McPherson]

@asyas_illos awesome, thanks!

[Heather Boyd]

@griffin

1. I think if you slightly moved the bottom portion up. I was looking at it being 1/3 bottom, 2/3s top but it's just a tad bit more than 2/3s at the top. If you understand me.

2. The bend is cool in the roof; it makes the house feel alive and worn down and aged, like it's hunched over, gives a lot relatable personality.

3. Is the log on the front right meant to be holding up the house or is that a tangent?

[Griffin McPherson]

@heather-boyd the log is just holding up the leg of the porch roof.