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    • Larue
      Larue last edited by

      Okay, so I wasn't feeling my last sketch, too hard to get a little kid to look like he's growling fiercely and not crying so, I thinks this sketch has more of a story to tell. Thoughts?
      tiger tub sm.jpg

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      • Kim Hunter
        Kim Hunter @Larue last edited by

        @larue Can't tell what the story is. Is this a house pet? (I lived in Hollywood for a while - tigers happen). Or did this tiger family break in? Something in the picture needs to hint at how the family returning home will react when they find the tigers in the bath.

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by

          I agree with what @Kim-Hunter said. Also as a mom of three young Cubs, my face never looks this relaxed when I finally get a bath and then the kids break through the door.😜

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          • Larue
            Larue @Kim Hunter last edited by

            e@kim-hunter Hi Kim, I was thinking this story would be along the lines of Goldilocks and the Three Bears. While the family was away they have kinda made their way through every room and now only one lil guy knows they have returned. Any ideas to make that clearer?

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            • Larue
              Larue @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @asyas_illos Ha!, as a mom of two, all grown up now kids, I remember very well looking to a bath to get a moments peace.

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              • Kim Hunter
                Kim Hunter @Larue last edited by Kim Hunter

                @larue Perhaps a point of entry like an open or broken window. Or some 3 bears images like different sized towels hanging on the wall. Could even be monogramed. Could have a trail of destruction leading into the house that the people are examining and looking like - "what the devil is going on here?"

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                • randarrington
                  randarrington @Larue last edited by randarrington

                  @larue how about the little tiger that's sees that the family has returned is pointing out the window with a panicked look on his face looking back at the tub tiger trying to get it's attention...and the other two small tigers are already starting to book it out of the room.....

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                  • Larue
                    Larue @randarrington last edited by

                    @randarrington Thanks for the help...I'm gonna tweek it a bit.

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                    • Larue
                      Larue @Kim Hunter last edited by

                      @kim-hunter Thanks, I'll put some more thought into it and try to squeeze a few more details in to clarify.

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                      • DoodleMick
                        DoodleMick last edited by

                        I do like this scene much better. I also agree with what has already been said. Maybe have the tiger at the window switched over to the other side, closer to the larger tiger’s head where he can be reaching back grabbing momma tiger’s whiskers, and momma having a pained look on her face. Nice drawing though.

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @larue well you were lucky then I can’t even find piece in my own bathroom!😭

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