Work in Progress Can You Wait,Ninja?

[Kori Jensen]

Hey Friends!

I have been working on this book on an inconsistent basis. Can You Wait, Ninja? is the second book in a series that teaches the importance of patience.
The story goes that the little ninja has been invited to a cupcake part, and is finding it hard to resist eating her cupcake before the party. She uses her ninja skills like; meditation, imagination, and breathing exercises to resist the temptation.

Note: the Spine will be dead center and the text is not the end result.

What do you guys think? I need an honest critique that is constructive and helps in colour and values. If you have any other advice, I'd hugely appreciate it.

HUGE THANKS!