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    Mountain painting - need your critique :-)

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    • aska
      aska last edited by

      Hi 🙂

      I always promise myself to visit this forum more often and always forget until I have a new request for you... I really need to get better! 🙂

      So, remember when you were super helpful with my last painting? Seriously I wouldn't do it without your help! (reminder just below)

      So here is another painting idea from the series of mountains with human faces.

      What do you think? Don't be shy to criticise and push me to do better like you did last time 😉

      MountainGiants_page.jpg
      Giant_krn_summer_draft1.jpg
      Giant_krn_summer_draft.jpg

      Aska
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      • verysamish
        verysamish last edited by

        Fun idea for a painting series! I like the moment when it is just a landscape and then you suddenly see the face. I wonder if there is a way to push the concept a bit further by adding some element of a story? Maybe have a small character whose face mirrors the mountain?

        This reminded me of a doodle I did way back when. But lots more faces! Haha! Best of luck!mt_headmore.jpg

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        • aska
          aska @verysamish last edited by

          @verysamish Thanks! BTW your sketch is very funky! 😉

          Aska
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          • aska
            aska last edited by

            Hi, guys!

            I was working on and off on this and I think Giant_krn_summer7.jpg I am finally happy with my draft (I am going to paint it with acrylics). What do you think? 🙂

            Aska
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