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    • Mariana B.
      Mariana B. last edited by

      Hello! Here is my design for Junes challenge, Meet Albert!
      I love drawing raccoons so I had a lot of fun!
      The thing I am not sure no I hope somebody can help, is with the template. Is it supposed to have all that white space around or did I misunderstood the instructions?BBEBB9DA-5000-4C5E-912E-FD59CFD745A2.jpeg

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      • Oana
        Oana @Mariana B. last edited by

        @M-Rybo for the previous challenge I noticed many used all the space up to the edges. The racoon is cute 🙂 And I like the stealth team jacket. I had some trouble though understanding what was happening in the background - the overturned fridge... not sure what to say, maybe it lacks enough detail or the position is unrealistic?

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        • Mariana B.
          Mariana B. @Oana last edited by

          @Oanav thank you for the feedback! Yes I had a lot of trouble with that one, I wanted to show him getting in trouble so I made him running away holding Ice cream and then the background is trying to show like the fridge fell over and spilled all its contents, almost like saying that he climbed up to get the ice cream but by doing so he made the whole thing fall lol I made it blurry because I didn’t want to competing for attention but I agree something about it bugs me, maybe because I didn’t apply any color at all on any of the elements in that background?

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          • Mariana B.
            Mariana B. @Oana last edited by

            Here is an updated version
            I stretched the image to get closed to the edges. And I changed the background in the bottom right image
            Mariana_Boune-June.jpg

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            • Oana
              Oana @Mariana B. last edited by

              @M-Rybo I think the background is improved, the fridge mess idea is much easier to read!

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              • Mariana B.
                Mariana B. @Oana last edited by

                @Oanav thank you!

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                • TaniaGomesArt
                  TaniaGomesArt last edited by

                  Looks super cute 🙂

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                  • Mariana B.
                    Mariana B. @TaniaGomesArt last edited by

                    @TaniaGomesArt thank you!! 🙂

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