May Contest Progress! Check it out and share your opinions!

[Georgios Christopoulos]

Hello fellas!
I was not sure if I wanted to get on the challenge this month but I figured...what is the worst that might happen!
So I ll be uploading my thought process on this scene.
Here we go.
Joseph and Dominic are in pursuit of the Goblin Sharks that attack J's village.
That might evolve in a various ways..

Zoom in and check the little details,if you want!
I have yet to decide with which version should I go.

Let me know what you think,or if you have questions,shoot them up!!

Talk to you soon!
PS I also uploaded the character sheet, for whoever might want to check it out!

[K.Flagg]

I can’t wait to see which you decide on. They are all good. I think surprise #3 and ready to dive are my personal faves.

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@K-Flagg mine too! It s gonna be hard to decide

[Georgios Christopoulos]

Working a bit more on the concepts,see what kind of feeling I get from them.

[Georgios Christopoulos]

Sketch stage of one of the two scenes I am hoping to do.
Old men make mistakes all the time,don t make a thing out of it!

[Georgios Christopoulos]

Both scenes I d like to do are sketched at a basic level!
I hope I ll make it through the deadline!
Which one do you think works better?

[Jeremy Ross]

Hi @Georgios-Christopoulos, both of these are awesome! I really like how you’re carrying your same character through the latest contests.

I really like the first piece on top, the composition is great and has energy. But I also like the dangerous sharks in the second piece. I’m wonder if you can add an element of surprise in the water to give the viewers a glimpse of upcoming trouble for Joseph and Dominic?

[Valerie Light]

@Georgios-Christopoulos These are great! I vote for the second image, because it reads as a complete story, and I love the fun perspective you're going for.

[lizardillo]

@Georgios-Christopoulos I just realised I put my reply in the May WIP post by mistake! I was going to ask if you felt something could stick out of the waterline to break the barrier between the top and bottom. The big shark's fin?

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@Jeremy-Ross thanks Jeremy!I figured why not having some sequential art pieces at the end of these traveller challenges. (portfolio material)
You mean the horde of shark goblin lurking in the water is not a troubling enough precursor ?? Just kidding,I want to thing of some element of surpise but I am stuck at the moment
@Valerie-Light Thank you so much Valerie!
@lizardillo that s what I initially thought off.I really wanted to bring an element of surprise in the image, but I got stuck with the fin or the tail,and I really wanted to put something more "unexpected''

[Georgios Christopoulos]

Begun with the first version of old man s situation.
Inks are done,and I am currently working on the colour pallette.
Any thoughts on it?

I really hope I ll manage to get both entries in.
Really want to finish them both

[Georgios Christopoulos]

Alright,I m calling this done!
In the journey of searching and avenging the shark goblins who have Josephs underwater village under capture, some mistakes were made by the young at heart Dominic.
He stays fierce though,no problem at all!!
Always having a blast with full illustrations!!