WIP critiques please!
Total beginner here and I would really appreciate some feedback! What can I do to improve this? I’m wondering if I should crop it down to exclude the rocks to the left of the cave? This is my first piece after going through some of the classes here so I’m sure I have lots of room for improvement. I have no idea if illustration is something that I should pursue, but I sure do enjoy it!
Hope you’re all having a great day!
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Nicolas Gagnon-Fee last edited by
@e-watson613 I find the somewhat subtle variations in color and the lighting pretty interesting. I would tend to think that you could crop off the rocks on the left. This way, the characters would be in spots that respect the rule of thirds, and I think it could look better balanced. Welcome to the forum, and good luck with your classes at SVS!
Great, thanks so much!