I’ve been looking at it too long...halp
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I’ve been looking at this too long.
Creepy little pumpkin serial killer for spooky time.
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Hi @story-paint Fun concept! Great job with the juxtaposition between your characters.
My critique would be that the composition seems a bit heavy towards the left side. I've found that mirroring my canvas at various points through the process has been very helpful in spotting this type of issue.
I hope you don't mind, I went ahead and did a quick flip of the main character and her table to show how I personally would balance the image (I'm also a big fan of centered/triangular compositions, which I know many people aren't, so feel free to ignore my solution).
Nice character design and I love how you added the cat to make it extra cozy.
(Ignore the change in color--that sometimes happens when I paste images into Procreate)
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@miranda-hoover I hadn’t considered that! i really like that solution. And no, I don’t mind you playing with the image at all.