23 Oct 2017, 09:21

Hey @aska! First off, I think these are great, I especially love the foxes. The character of the animals really shines through in each of the drawings. Just a minor thing I can see in the wolf image- I think, for me, as they are bunched closely together at fist glance the forms kind of blend together then when you look at the detail you can make them out better. Maybe by adding some shadow/ highlight around the edges like you've done with the bears it might help to define them more and help them really pop? (Hope that makes sense!?) But as I said before I think the character in these is really strong and you get a great sense of them playing together 😃