20 Aug 2017, 21:56
critiques still welcome
worst fear wip
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worst fear for the wolf...
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critiques welcome
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critiques still welcome
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I think the composition is a bit too busy and the positioning of the wolf is confusing, I like the concept but it might be better told in a comic strip format.
If you want to keep it to a single image I think it would be cool to have the pigs all laughing and pointing inside the house rather than standing. You could have the wolf in the foreground perhaps coughing and holding or using his inhaler and the house looming in the background with the pigs in.
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@gary-wilkinson Thanks for the critique. I am trying to do the layout design that Terry talks about all the time with foreground middle ground and background easily understood. The wolf is larger because he is in the front... I thought the idea of the pigs standing outside the house, on the path behind the wolf conveyed the idea of no fear of the wolf. Not trying to put down what you said, thank you for your time. I am honored for any response.
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Very funny and well thought out.