17 Feb 2024, 15:01

I am currently working on the story for my illustration and would appreciate some feedback as I'm getting a little stuck.

My basic idea is that someone steals an egg from a griffin nest.
Some questions I'm asking are:

  • Why does someone need the egg? Collecting? Selling? Using for some magical/medicinal purpose?
  • How are they transporting the egg?
  • Does the mom griffin know they're stealing it? If so, how is she responding?
  • Are the thieves good or bad?
  • Where is the nest? In a huge tree? In a cave? On a mountain?

In my sketching, I'm leaning towards it being for collecting/selling purposes and the thieves will be carrying the egg in a net as it is so massive. Perhaps there's a ship they're heading for.

I'm getting stuck with the mom griffin's reaction though. Should we see her in the background being mad? Should she be asleep? Maybe they left a boulder in place of the egg while she slept? If they're stealing the egg for malicious reasons, should I not include a humorous element like that?

My mind is going in a thousand different directions, but I know with the deadline looming, I will have to make some decisions very soon, so any help is greatly appreciated!