2 Feb 2024, 07:02
@Laurie-Sawyer
Cute story telling. I can hear her laughing.
February 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art
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This is a digital study to plan a future gouache painting.
If this piece is selected for critique, I would most appreciate feedback on improving composition, lighting or especially color. Thanks!
Style inspiration is "Short story #2" by Chiara Bautista:
https://www.facebook.com/photo/?fbid=733357601479235&set=a.733357588145903 -
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@Enni-Heikura
I think this would work well as an editorial piece! -
@skeletortoise
I like you’re color palette, there is no question as to who main character is, good story building. -
@Joshua-Chennault
I really like your color palette, character design and graphic style! -
@Laurie-Sawyer
Cute story telling. I can hear her laughing. -
@skeletortoise This turned out great!! well done.
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@skeletortoise Love how your piece turned out! Very nice color choices, especially on the jar. You went all out on the details in the room and made some smart choices about how to combine your two layouts. Window plus observatory was a great solution. And the concept is more clear now with all the other labeled star jars. Very cool!
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@Jeremy-Ross Awesome! You're knocking this shape language stuff out of the park! That shark has so many scary triangles! I really appreciate that you took the time to check out my book recommendation and I hope it was helpful.
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@skeletortoise @AustinShurtliff
Forgot to name my file correctly. Sorry about that and thanks.
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@Tom-Harshberger @Larue thank you both!
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@Larue Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun telling this story!
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Thanks @reberlik ! I love the book and plan on making more pieces based on the concepts.
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@reberlik I'd like to include the linework for my piece as well if that's okay.
I've been looking at it the past few days on various screens and thinking the details may not be visible. Thanks!
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I love that the the next two prompts are related, maybe next year the HTFYA will be 12 consecutive prompts so you end up with a book you can keep.
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Here is my entry for ‘trapped’
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@Larue oh thank you! Maybe you are right