27 May 2023, 19:26

@Solomon-Designs one thing I might consider changing, is all the pictures have the same colors, specifically for the backgrounds. The colors should match how you want the reader to feel or understand how Jack feels. Like warm and happy or excited, vs scared, or gloomy, or suspenseful.
Also, if you make a black and white copy of it, you should really push the variety of value on each page by adding light and shadows. Helps make scenes like the last page more dramatic.