3 May 2023, 11:56

@blackhound-rise I love the loose lines you've used to show the basic form of the person. I agree with @Geoffrey-Mégardon about the line of action and where the feet go. I see the feet haven't made it onto the page, which immediately loses the figure's balance. I tend to first draw 2 lines were the feet go then a mark for the hips, shoulders and top of head (or from the top down), so I know the full figure will fit on the page and that the basic proportions are there.
I also love to switch it up, if you want some alternative options: instead of the outlines of the figure, I get a lot of watery paint on my brush and blob the silhouette on the page (thinking about shape rather than outline). Or get a thick piece of charcoal or something similar so that I get to make thick shapes and thin lines where necessary. (They might actually go into all this in the course - I haven't done that one - so I'm sorry if I'm saying what you already know!)
Anyway, great work! Keep going and enjoying. It's amazing how useful it is to practice drawing the human form; it's never wasted.