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I thought it would be interesting to share another progression of redraws. The first time I tried this concept was many years ago. I brought it to the NE SCBWI conference for my portfolio crit. It wasn't until a couple of years ago that I came back to it for a redraw, but it was still falling flat. I did the most recent version over this past week. Each time I finished a version, I thought I was done, but each time, coming back to them, I realized how much work they still needed, to clarify the story, to improve the palette, values and perspective. And, they look like they were done by 3 different people. I'm sure there are still things to fix with the newest version, but I feel like progress is slowly but surely being made. Thanks for looking 
Version 1
Version 2
Version 3
