10 Oct 2022, 18:06

Hello welcome to the forum! Highly recommend the classes!
I agree with @Frogpunzel with there being too many focal points, it clutters your composition. The story is clear, which is good. But I’m not sure what the circle at the bottom is. I did a draw over to show how your composition could improve, I hope that’s ok. First I’d remove the two fish circling the top and I’d raise the baby fish and hook a bit. I’d also remove the circle and the small fish behind it to de-clutter the bottom. And raise mama fishes glow lure up for a clearer silhouette. I also added fins to her. I Hope this was helpful to you. Looking forward to seeing more from you!😊
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