Cloud WIP, Feedback please!

[JacksonAdamsArt]

Hi everyone! Here's my idea for the Cloud contest... Do you guys think the story reads clearly? Is the composition good? Anything I should add/remove before I finish it up?

[Asyas_illos]

What a great concept! The only feedback I have is the baby’s head could use a little reshaping, sorry it’s very, um, vegetable shaped? I would make it a bit larger and rounder, good luck!

[JacksonAdamsArt]

@Asyas_illos Thanks! Oh you're right, I'll change that

[miranda-hoover]

@JacksonAdamsArt Cute concept!

[JacksonAdamsArt]

About done I think! Any more critiques?

[Asyas_illos]

Looks good I like your color choices

[kirsten-mcg]

@JacksonAdamsArt This is such a cute idea!

[A Former User]

@JacksonAdamsArt Such a fun idea!

[ArtMelC]

@JacksonAdamsArt so cute! For a final tweak, could you vary the width of the light rays coming through the window? Now it looks like the brush size is that and you just went with it. I would fit the rays to be the width of the window with perhaps 1-2 narrower rays