Knight Cherio update!
Here's the update of the first spread after your comments! Please let me know what you think! It looks a bit dark, maybe tone down a bit? Do I need to place more toys? how about the new face?
This one makes me wonder what the baby has seen! Great job on values, if you color it please share!
Love the blocks and stick horse! I think you are right, it is a bit too dark. Just don't lose the contrast. The face is sweet. I love the mouth. Those are very cute teeth! The iris of his left eye isn't right...he looks cross-eyed. We wouldn't see the whites of his eye on the far right of the image. Make sense? Lovely scene!