Dragonfly idea.
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So for this months prompt I decided to try out illustrating in a different genre, early chapter books. I wrote a quick piece of text as a jumping off point as if it were in the middle of the book. Most of the books that I have looked threw are done in gray scale or have one additional color, I am trying to decide if I want to add that additional color to my work. I would love to hear some feedback on anything having to do with the art (I am not concreting on the writing, I am just using it as a guide). Thank you.
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This is really cute Mandy! A couple of critiques I have:
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It looks like the hand is on the wrong way for the girl in the back. Should her thumb be on the opposite side of the hand?
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It would be nice to have some line detail or simple shadows on the rocks the boy is leaning on, so he looks more solidly planted on the rocks.
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@TessaW thank you. I will work on the line work a little more and yes I agree there needs to be a shadow behind the boy.