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      wip first 2 pages, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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      • Jana
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        Great job. @leontine: Leontine will like it, too. 🙂 @smoke: you should check out Leontines hedgehog post.
        I like how you work with color and value. I guess these guys are packing for winter?

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          wip page 3 and 4, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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            wip page 5 and 6, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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              wip page 7 and 8, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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                wip page 9 and 10, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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                  wip page 11 and 12, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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                      @smoke said:

                      @Jana sorry, where are my manners! 🤔 Thanks for the positive feedback, new here so, hello! 😊 I just checked her work on FB and indeed, I must say that she indeed is a great illustrator as an artist! So thank you! 😉

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                      • Jana
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                        Welcome, Smoke, in this great forum. 🙂
                        I cannot wait to see more from you. I am drawing just for fun. I earn my money as a biologist. But if I see posts like yours, I start dreaming of an alternative life... 😉 I hope you keep us updated about this project.

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                        • Leontine
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                          @smoke Hallo Buurman! welkom! XD Love your illustrations, there really nicely rendered and your use of color is really nice! Can you tell us more about the story? I am working on a book about hedgehogs as well, they are so adorable! There first thing that I notice is the nose of the hedgehog. At first he's very wide, and as the story continues, it gets thinner. on the last one the three has somehow to much detail, although its very nice at itself, objects that move farther away, lose detail and color, may be tone it down a bit? Anyway nice to meet you here, its real fun and there's so much to learn!
                          Next time when you're here on the forum bring me a nice Belgium beer and some chocolate will you? XD LOL

                          Leontine
                          "A picture is worth a thousand words."

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                            wip page 13 and 14, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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                              smoke @Leontine last edited by smoke

                              @Leontine Hallo terug!! 😃 ty for the feedback, still working on it, i want it to be perfect so i take my time on the illustrations and i'll take your feedback in consideration. 😃 on page 3 &4 i changed the buildings allready because the structure dind fit the buildings on page 1&2. 🙂 but its far from ready! 😞 and sorry, i have beer and chocolate but i dont know how to email it?! 😛 good luck on your book about hedgehogs and i'll share the story when the book is published , but ill post the rest of the pages and you will figured it out 😉

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                                @Jana ty for the warm welcom 😃 and dreams can come true if you put your time and heart in it 🙂 this is a sideproject, am mostly making concept peaces for someone that's making sculptures and structures for themepark's and festivals, and i am still learning to understand everything about color, values and so on!! but i love it! so there will be potential growth! 🙂

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                                  wip page 15 and 16, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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                                    wip page 17 and 18, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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                                      wip page 19 and 20, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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                                        wip page 21, pro feedback always welcome, its for publish! 😉

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                                            thats all folks, yust rendering everything, because i want it to be perfect!! 😃

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