new piece, please critique



  • hi,

    I haven't posted for ages. How about this one? 😉0_1527020446717_tiny pleasures_3.jpg



  • Hello,

    her are my thoughts, overall the image is cute and the line work is pretty good but it could have more weight in shadow areas and less in the light areas. I feel like the glasses are off kilter on the middle animals face because they look like they are centered but the head is turned slightly. The way the paw on the animal on the left is sitting over the other paw seems a bit off but this could be fixed with value. Also maybe putting ears on the left animal would help Identify what it is.