some pic for critique
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hi, just another pic for short story about a girl in a weird world of fantasy
Ian curious what you will say about it...
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I really like the kangaroo and bunny but the ape doesn't seem to fit in because his color is more realistic maybe he could be a bright color. Also the hand on the ape is very unclear looking. The little girl's hand could possibly have only three fingers be a little less mushy.
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@rcartwright thank you for recognizing its an ape;) its a good point to change its colour
