June 3rd Thursday revised

  • Hopefully looks more like a beach scene. Before:
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  • I love the added details! It really adds to the scene. Two quick thoughts: 1) Sand isn't that hard--when you sit in it, you sink a little--so I would draw up some sand around the bigger characters, especially the bear who would sink in a lot being so heavy. 2) The ocean looks like fog to me. Even with the foam, it would have a crisp line, not blurry. You would also have dark sand where it is wet between the foam and dry sand...so it would be a dark tan instead of blue. I absolutely adore the boys expressions! Perfect!

  • @Joy-Heyer Excellent points, thank you!

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