June 3rd Thursday revised

[Rebecca Hirsch]

Hopefully looks more like a beach scene. Before:

After:

[Joy Heyer]

I love the added details! It really adds to the scene. Two quick thoughts: 1) Sand isn't that hard--when you sit in it, you sink a little--so I would draw up some sand around the bigger characters, especially the bear who would sink in a lot being so heavy. 2) The ocean looks like fog to me. Even with the foam, it would have a crisp line, not blurry. You would also have dark sand where it is wet between the foam and dry sand...so it would be a dark tan instead of blue. I absolutely adore the boys expressions! Perfect!

[Rebecca Hirsch]

@Joy-Heyer Excellent points, thank you!