Spring critique!

[NoWayMe]

Hello everyone!

This week-end I had the chance to participate in the Spring Critique and have one of my illustration critiqued by @Lee-White and @Will-Terry. They had great suggestion to improve my piece, and I wanted to share the updates with you!

First, here is the original

Here was their suggestions :
− Get rid of at least 50 % of the animals in the background
− Rework bushes (add detailed leaves, too fuzzy, not finished)
− Add grass at transition light/dark
− Shadows on Alfred too dark
− Bush hiding mouse not high enough
− Group mouse on the same side

I made several of the changes. I am in the process of reworking the bushes (obviously not done) but I wanted to share it with you and see what you thought! If anyone has other comments, please go ahead!

[Dih]

@NoWayMe I can see the subtle changes and it looks good