Spring critique!

  • Hello everyone!

    This week-end I had the chance to participate in the Spring Critique and have one of my illustration critiqued by @Lee-White and @Will-Terry. They had great suggestion to improve my piece, and I wanted to share the updates with you!

    First, here is the original

    0_1462415901657_Feb 2016 3rdThursday - Noemie Gionet Landry.jpg

    Here was their suggestions :
    − Get rid of at least 50 % of the animals in the background
    − Rework bushes (add detailed leaves, too fuzzy, not finished)
    − Add grass at transition light/dark
    − Shadows on Alfred too dark
    − Bush hiding mouse not high enough
    − Group mouse on the same side

    I made several of the changes. I am in the process of reworking the bushes (obviously not done) but I wanted to share it with you and see what you thought! If anyone has other comments, please go ahead!

    0_1462416162315_Alfred - 3rd Thursday - NGLandry crit.jpg

  • @NoWayMe I can see the subtle changes and it looks good 🙂

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