composition...and other feedback?

[Katt]

Hi,
Where would you frame/crop this picture?

First pic is whole pic (I didn't finish parts because I knew I would absolutely crop those out). Second is where I think I might crop.

Also, I would love any other feedback..I've been picking away at little personal projects, and working on refining my style at the same time and would love any feedback.

Thanks so much, have a great weekend.

[A Former User]

@Katt your potential crop indicated by the red dash line will be an improvement. I like it

[Katt]

@thomas-young thank you