Feedback for basic perspective drawing
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Hello Everyone! My name is Victor, hopping to be a professional Illustrator and designer! I finished Foundation Lv 1 basic perspective and this is my final project for the class, I would love some feedback on how to take this piece to the next level. I added some simple value to make it more digestible.!
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@VictorSoto Hi! You did a good job! I like the little details in the room that tell a story about the child who lives here.
The first thing that stood out to me is the door. It just feels off. I think you are mostly within perspective technically, but I sketched out what I would do instead. Mostly I narrowed it up, gave a little more angle to the frame, and opened the bottom part of the door so that it is more visually clear. Hope this helps give an idea what I see
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@jahn thanks for the feedback! Yeah that door was an issue and I am glad you pointed it out, thanks for the feedback I’ll make sure to correct those mistakes