Feed back on sketches for Jan HTFYA
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Two ideas for our prompt, one dealing with things that go bump in the night and investigating the source and the second, the one thing I hate about camping, having to use the restroom late at night.
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@Larue I like Option 2 better. It is has a stronger story, and is less cliché. You might make it stronger if you put the girl on the left extreme, and an outhouse/bathroom on the right, in the distance, as her destination. Maybe put the toilet paper in her right hand (no bag), and the flashlight in her left for a better silhouette. Other than that, I think it's great idea!
And for the record, I always hated having to go to the bathroom at night while camping as well. One place we stayed had just a basic closed-in toilet, and the walls were about 1 foot off the ground, so any critter could just come right in!
