WIP Portfolio piece: farm animal field trip
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@kayleenartlover love the updated bus design and how the story is progressing! I like the small colored bus in your thumbnails above. There is a lot of character in that drawing with it being slightly skewed in the jump.
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@tom-barrett which picture are you referring to?
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How does this look? I tried to exaggerate the tires so it wouldn’t look stiff. Any tips on the line weight? Should I make any lines thicker?
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Here’s the colored version of the bus. If it doesn’t need any changes, then all that’s left is the animals driving/riding it and other details like in the thumbnail.
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Should I move the back right tire where it was supposed to go perspective-wise or would that make it look more stiff? Does it look like there is movement happening if I leave it the way it is? I plan on adding a hill below it like it's catching air going over it.
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@jenn yes! Those flying buses are soo rad lol
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I think it should look a bit like this, its off the ground so the wheels are not compressed against it
Stroogle.xyz (webcomic)
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@makekong I haven't drawn the ground part yet, but it's gonna be kinda bouncing up, but I'll draw a sketch to compare
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@makekong oh wait do you mean the tires are actually lower than the body of the bus?
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@kayleenartlover yes because the springs extend like a frog jumping
Stroogle.xyz (webcomic)
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@makekong oh that's a really cool way to describe it! Thanks!
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I'm back at this project again. How do the animal sketches look? I want the bus to look full of excited animals making a getaway to go on their own field trip. Do the sizes of the animals look correct?
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I’m so close to finishing this… How does the lettering look? Should I make the drawing bigger and have the road drawn to the bottom of the page, or keep it a centered vignette?
Here’s a closeup of the bus:
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