Tiger feedback request
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Wondering if anyone could give me some feedback on my entry for tiger. I was pretty happy with how it turned out, but I'm thinking that maybe a tiger in the foreground would have been better than the tail and paw. Does anyone have any suggestions? I'd really appreciate it.
Thank you.
P.s. Congrats to everyone who made it into the top 16 ! There were some really nice entries
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@brettb_draws I think you answered your own question, yes I think it would have been better to have more of the tiger visible if not all, I think there’s a lot of unnecessary jungle, too if it were mine I think I would have a bit more of the bedroom and less jungle with the tiger more prominent. Something similar to “where the wild things are”
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@brettb_draws I agree with Asya. But I think there would be a second option. I can imagine to keep the jungle as main part, but then I would fill it with life. Like an overflowing jungle with much to discover and then either the tiger very prominent or really well hidden and make it clearer that the boy loves the tiger especially and is searching for the tiger in all the jungle life.
In short decide on what is the main story you want to tell and then highlight that story more.
I love the jungle, it has great colors and looks really deep. The idea with the bedroom is really great, too! -
@asyas_illos Thank you ! I agree, I think making the bedroom take up a little more space would probably create more storytelling opportunities as well
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@sonja-müller Thanks very much! Yes I agree I think adding more life would make it a lot more interesting, and having the boy hug his tiger a little tighter. Excited to start adding stuff!
