Society of Visual Storytelling

    SVSLearn Forums

    • Register
    • Login
    • Search
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Popular
    • Users
    • Groups
    • Search

    February prompt rough thumbnails, will this fit?

    Questions & Comments
    2
    3
    261
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • kayleenartlover
      kayleenartlover last edited by

      92CBD4C5-5A45-47FC-9A95-E4C73466E887.jpeg
      I’m trying to decide if this idea is worth exploring further?

      I want to show her proud, excited face and possibly have some family members in there to get funny reactions. There are several ways I could play around with the perspective and add more details in the garage, but I’m not sure if it’s gonna work and fit with the prompt. What do you guys think?

      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
      • Holumpa
        Holumpa last edited by

        I think the idea of a giant volcano experiment with overflowing foam absolutely fits. My idea would be that you focus more on what is the desaster outcome, like the mother could open the door from house to garage and the whole bottom garage is full of foam. Just a first idea.
        I get the idea that the washed car is also full of foam but I think there is not really a story point in adding the car. But maybe I just did not get it.
        I am not sure if that helps but I would love to see your idea explored further.

        https://www.instagram.com/holumpa/

        kayleenartlover 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
        • kayleenartlover
          kayleenartlover @Holumpa last edited by

          @holumpa Good to know. My thought about the car was thinking of how to show it's a garage but also gonna be a pain to clean up. I probably won't include it unless I have a parent's reaction to seeing the project but also seeing the mess. I might try having the scene be when they get home from the science fair...

          Thank you for commenting. ♥ 🙏 I really appreciate hearing feedback, because I couldn't tell if it was worth continuing but I was also didn't like any other ideas that I came up with since making that post. I feel much better about it now. I will definitely post an update this weekend!

          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
          • First post
            Last post