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    Bedroom Sketch - Feedback Wanted!

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    • ambria
      ambria last edited by

      Hello! This is a room that I designed myself. I started out with a floor plan, and I am going to be drawing it from different perspectives. This is my first attempt. How is it? What can I do better? The details are not very clear because it was drawn pretty small. Thank you and have a great day!

      bedroom drawing 1.jpeg

      Ambria (Bri) :D

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      • R. Fey Realme
        R. Fey Realme last edited by

        I think it is a great start! if you take a picture of it and draw over it in a program like auto desk or procreate that has perspective guides it will help you have straight lines that will really bring the piece together. Beyond that, this is a very believable bedroom, and I like the layout.

        Instagram: @feyrealmeart
        Website: feyrealmeart.com

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        • K.Flagg
          K.Flagg last edited by

          This is a nice layout and all of your little items in room are great! The one thing that sticks out to me more than anything is the head board and nightstand are leaning forward. They should be as straight as the window and door frames.

          K.Flagg

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          • Nico Ecenarro
            Nico Ecenarro last edited by

            Great work and a dynamic angle! I think you might be unaware of a 3rd point of perspective. The headboard and night stand seems like they should have vertices slightly angled toward the bottom center. Loving these exercises your doing! 💪

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            • LouD
              LouD last edited by LouD

              Looks great, especially all the work you did with the floorboards! I hope you don’t mind that I did a quick draw over. It looks like you used 2d perspective, so I kept all the verticals straight.
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              Something you might want to keep in mind is that the blue circle between the two vanishing points is the edge of your field of view. Things start to appear more distorted as you get closer to that edge. You may want to place your objects more towards the center.

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              • ambria
                ambria last edited by

                @R-Fey-Realme @K-Flagg @Nico-Ecenarro @LouD Thank you all for your feedback! I really appreciate it!

                Ambria (Bri) :D

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