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    1st time epiphany and I need your help remaking Wales the yeti.

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    • frankiiij
      frankiiij last edited by frankiiij

      So a Hefty story has hit me this morning and I'm looking to see what I can do to fix my yeti.

      I plan to change his chest and bell. Maybe making his entire body a shape.

      I like the white out eyes and fur against the purple.

      So what would make yeti someone you would hangout with at your favorite spot?

      Any feed back is graciously accepted!

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      Much love, Frank Johnson III

      Much love and God bless!

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      • Jeremy Ross
        Jeremy Ross @frankiiij last edited by

        Hi @dafoota, I like the purple and white combo and the long skinny legs. Maybe lose the hat and give his face more rounded features? His jaw almost looks like the hungry, hungry hippo game, which is okay if that’s what you’re going for.

        Can’t wait to see your re-imagined Yeti!

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        • K.Flagg
          K.Flagg last edited by

          I liked this design, i thought the hat was a fun personality choice. The only thing I can think of to make the design a little better is change up the tones a little. If you put it into grey scale you may notice that there is not much difference in the color of the hat, his face color, and his tongue. Maybe try playing with the contrast in those colors a bit? I also think he could have more personality in his eyes. Over all though I think this design was fun.

          K.Flagg

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          • frankiiij
            frankiiij @K.Flagg last edited by

            @K-Flagg Thank you for the feedback. I will definitely need to learn more about value harmonies and contrast. If that is a thing. I thought to look good at first. I will add that to my long list! Thanks again for your kind words and encouragement.

            Much love and God bless!

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            • frankiiij
              frankiiij @Jeremy Ross last edited by

              @Jeremy-Ross I truly like him. To be honest, I didn't steer too far away from the original. I just don't like the chest and belly for now. It'l prolly help if i had a style. Thanks for the encouragement. Maybe he can just chill until we both reinvent ourselves.

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              Much love and God bless!

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