@Coreyartus Thank you so much! Your post is super encouraging, I'm really glad you liked it and that it reads as it does for you. Making art can really put you in a weird place sometimes where you can't see things as other people do anymore, so I really appreciate the feedback here. I hadn't thought of doing an illustrated version of the play to be honest, but it might be a fun idea! As for text, yes, I would like to put at least a title on, but haven't quite worked my way around to that piece yet. Thanks again for taking the time to leave the feedback!