12 Sept 2024, 11:16

@Michael-Angelo-Go this is a great start mate. I can't give a definite critique because I struggle with this style. But one bit of advice I'd give is to go into a big book store and take photos of ALL the YA art you can find. Look for consistent style elements between them all. How do they do eyes? Mouths? Poses? What details are kept or discarded? Try copying a few exactly as you see them to get the feel for it. Your goal isn't to be a clone of other art, but to see what works in that genre and apply it to your stuff.