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[ksfabian]

Here’s my updated sketch. I’d love feedback you all have been so helpful!

[ksfabian]

updated image but I feel like something is still off.

[Fey Realme]

That’s okay, just take it to Final. Some stuff you can’t fix until you get more leg work or pencil mileage. Plus, the point is to submit broken work, so just finish it out and submit it. I think if they talk about it, they would say the story is clear, the emotions are clear, the danger is clear, your composition isn't dead center, and it all makes sense—its just clear you’re new to figure drawing, and thats okay! Take it to finish, learn some stuff there, then do another one and another one and some action poses. Take the figure drawing class, go on Pinterest and learn body construction blocks from artist tutorial posts, and then keep doing more! Youve got a great start.