19 Jan 2021, 19:35

Hey folks! I've been working on a set of storyboards for a short animated film and I've gotten to the rough thumbnails stage. I would love some feedback.

These are rough thumbnails, so I'm not thinking too much yet about any composition details yet, mostly I just want to know if anything is confusing or unclear in terms of the storytelling.

If anyone has any general storyboarding tips, that would be helpful as well.

Thanks!
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