7 Aug 2020, 17:49

i feel for the grasshopper.
its a cool addition.
you could tweak it more on this, maybe have it like in freeze frame, like both legs upwards forward, perspective abit and the face are framed by the feet. and you could have that cool splash which i feel also, like have a trail of it from behind a little lower, like he splattered the water to the sides?
and that grasshopper is trying to be as cool as the kid with his weak and flimsy jump.

there can be so many options.

i would go for what feels most emotive for you.
whatever that is, and work on your composition with other devices, like contrast, shapes, edges, lines...etc, if you think the items that needs more attention.