Help with details



  • I really struggle with details and I know this piece needs some. Any suggestions on what I can add? Any suggestions on what is already there? Thanks.clouds1.jpg



  • The main thing I see is that you have two horizon lines. One where her feet are standing and there must be another one for us to be able to see the top side of her arms from this angle. If the horizon line was right down near her feet then we'd see a lot more of the bottom of her arms, but it might be a stylistic thing you're going for?

    Ace



  • Lovely concept! About the perspective : What @Ace-Connell says is correct, It would be better to have one 'point of view. And I also think is that it would be fun to play with light and shadow more. maybe to put a bit more drama in it, by adding stronger lights and shadows?