Joy Heyer last edited by
The 4+ feet of snow outside my door inspired me. But I like it too much to see it objectively. Anything that needs my attention? Is it too linear? Too much negative space? Too repetitive? (The white space on the side was added to widen the scene. As I add value and color, that seam will not stay.) Thanks!
sergio last edited by
Right side looks static comparing with the left sidde. Also, the characters are very similar in size in the right side. I think you can add more drama fixing that. I like the scarf behaving like arms in the last snow man.
Waiting for advances :)