@laurel-aylesworth I agree that the girl's pants need to be darkened, and I also think lightening the tail fin value would eliminate that as a focal point, so it's not competing with your main focal point.
Please take my advice with a grain of salt, so to speak, since I'm a newbie. I think it's cute that he's breaking the '4th wall.' What about the catbird looking down at the main character?
@coreyartus Not only is this super informative, it's inspiring as well. Thx so much for sharing your work!! I think yours is really good, too!