@Kevin-Longueil Hi Kevin, thank you so much for the awesome feedback! This is exactly what I needed. BTW, this is Tom Shannon artwork
Again, I'm so grateful for your feedback and illustration sample. I'm always amazed at how weird it is to "hit the wall" mentally and not "see" the problems to fix. It's so important to have a "sanity" check. Everything you mentioned is SPOT on! Now, I totally see my mistakes. Finally, I feel like I can move forward with the project. I owe you a beer Kevin! ( I assume you're over 21, lol! )