Hey Guys this is my entry, thank you
Sami Kaba

A harsh Criticism will be much appreciated
thx guys!

After some SVS classes :)!
any feed back will be appreciated

@Will-Terry Thank you so much Will it's a honor, i watched it like million times XD and i am trying to follow all the advises you mentioned and trying to apply them on my next piece thank you again

@K.-W. I did some changes to the overall ambiance, getting rid of the greens, and adding some light to the characters!

thank you guys.

@aska thank you, yea I am working on it

Hi Will, your work inspired me, after 30 days of being a student at SVS, i did my first complete digital painting and i hope you will give me some critiques.

the concept is kinda simple, three teenage friends like to gather at the elephant basement and hang out all the time, however this time the movie is way more scarier than expected, i was trying to capture the reactions under the influence of a scary dark night.
thank you.

@K.-W. hey thank you so much i am gonna take your advice and add some light on the characters, they look a little bit more dark than i wanted to

@TessaW

Hi Tessa,

thank you for reaching out and your absolutely right about the change of clothes dynamics, Also the ear thing blew my mind and how I ACTUALLY FORGOT TO INCLUDE AN EAR looool.

thank you so much!!

@Ben-Migliore thank you so much for your feed back i am gonna work on the points you mentioned and i surely show you the results, thank you

@TessaW

Done!

@TessaW

Hi Tessa,

thank you for reaching out and your absolutely right about the change of clothes dynamics, Also the ear thing blew my mind and how I ACTUALLY FORGOT TO INCLUDE AN EAR looool.

thank you so much!!

@Coreyartus

Hi Corey thank you for asking,

actually there is no story behind the character.

I am looking for a critique regarding the technique, line work, light and shadows.

thank you.

Hey guys, I am looking for feedback
any thoughts will be much appreciated
Thank you.

Hey Guys this is my entry, thank you
Sami Kaba

@nowayme Thank you for your feed back, its very helpful.
My weakness always been in values, maybe because i don't understand it.
I just turned the piece into black and white, and I can see exactly what u mean!
I am gonna mess with the values and see what happens.
About the story, ur actually right, and I like ur mouse traps everywhere thing, I think i'm gonna go with it!.

thank you so much for ur feedback!.

@aska thank you, yea I am working on it

Thank you, this actually very helpful, my eyes failed to see how the horns actually derived the focal point from the dragons!.
I am gonna go ahead and try to blend them with the background.
Thank you, that's very helpful!.

A harsh Criticism will be much appreciated
thx guys!

@Will-Terry Thank you so much Will it's a honor, i watched it like million times XD and i am trying to follow all the advises you mentioned and trying to apply them on my next piece thank you again