Hey Guys this is my entry, thank you
Sami Kaba

@nowayme Thank you for your feed back, its very helpful.
My weakness always been in values, maybe because i don't understand it.
I just turned the piece into black and white, and I can see exactly what u mean!
I am gonna mess with the values and see what happens.
About the story, ur actually right, and I like ur mouse traps everywhere thing, I think i'm gonna go with it!.

thank you so much for ur feedback!.

@aska thank you, yea I am working on it

Thank you, this actually very helpful, my eyes failed to see how the horns actually derived the focal point from the dragons!.
I am gonna go ahead and try to blend them with the background.
Thank you, that's very helpful!.

A harsh Criticism will be much appreciated
thx guys!

@Will-Terry Thank you so much Will it's a honor, i watched it like million times XD and i am trying to follow all the advises you mentioned and trying to apply them on my next piece thank you again

@natiwata
thank you for your feed back
and your right the first competition is stronger,
thank you for reference pic i think i am gonna repaint the peice based on the mood in the reference you provide thank you

@Rebecca-Hirsch

oh thank you, i am gonna light the background behind the pirate for sure that's an awesome advise thank you so much, and i agree the first piece is more dramatic, for some reason colors made it look more vivid and cheerful!.

thank you.

@Rapteev thank you
I can see what you mean exactly, i am gonna work on the legs for sure cause like you said it's kinda weird for two legs to be wooden
also i think i am gonna reconstruct the form of the rocks so it looks more natural

thank you for your advises

@JamesH
Thank you so much for your feedback, i am sorry for my late reply tho!
i agree with you totally, the sea in the first piece is more present and powerful, i will be working on that for sure

thank you